Question

假如你是李華。去年你在一家國際夏令營幫忙，收獲頗豐。今年，你想邀請你的好友 Jane一起參加，請根據(jù)夏令營的招聘廣告及提示要點給 Jane 寫一封 e-mail，不少于120個單詞。

Answer 1

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Dear Jane,
  I have already told you about the job I did last summer in the International Camp for children, do you remember? And this year they are looking for people for the same job so I have thought about you. Why don’t we do it together?
  We will work with children between 8 and 12 and will help with the outdoor activities, sports competitions and children’s games. The camp is situated in a wood, close to a river. It is such a beautiful place! Everybody sleeps in tents, which is very exciting. We have only 5 hours’ work a day so it gives us enough free time to visit the area and do some sports activities on our own. As well as the accommodation, the food is free. It is not wonderful, but it is not the most important.
  The contact with the children, the feeling of freedom, the sense of responsibility and the life in nature make this camp an unforgettable experience.
  Let me know as soon as possible if you are interested in it, but don’t hesitate too much. It is worth!
  I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
                                                             Yours,
                                                             Li Hua

試題分析：提綱作文應(yīng)該按所要求的內(nèi)容來寫，根據(jù)所列的內(nèi)容盡量以簡明扼要的語言來表達。根據(jù)題目要求和所列內(nèi)容來完成作文。寫這篇作文時盡量用所列出的詞匯和短語，運用高級的英語句子，真正體現(xiàn)英式的表達方式。寫作時要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語言環(huán)境。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如：I have already told you about the job I did last summer in the International Camp for children, The camp is situated in a wood, close to a river.還運用了定語從句Everybody sleeps in tents, which is very exciting.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：And，so，As well as ，if，but等。
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