Question

2013年《韓國(guó)時(shí)報(bào)》題為“假如中日步入戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)”的文章說(shuō)，日本自衛(wèi)隊(duì)員是世界上最強(qiáng)武裝力量的光榮子孫，這支部隊(duì)歷史上經(jīng)歷過(guò)太平洋戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)等諸多血戰(zhàn)，訓(xùn)練水平和戰(zhàn)斗經(jīng)驗(yàn)遠(yuǎn)強(qiáng)于中國(guó)，而且獲益于中國(guó)的獨(dú)生子女政策，現(xiàn)在的解放軍士兵大多是“小皇帝”，因此還是自衛(wèi)隊(duì)?wèi)?zhàn)斗力更強(qiáng)。
請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身和周圍同學(xué)實(shí)際，試分析
1. 獨(dú)生子女政策的利弊
2. 身為獨(dú)生子女的我們?cè)鯓优囵B(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立自主能力
3. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
The one-child policy has been adopted in China for decades.
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Answer 1

The one-child policy has been adopted in China. And it does benefit not only the society but also individuals.  With a better control of the population, the country has made remarkable achievements in the aspects of economic and social development while the family can focus on the only child and afford better education for him.
However, it still brings about a series of problems. As the center attention of families, the only children are easily spoiled by their parents and grandparents. Therefore, they are often selfish and lacking in independence.
As the only child in my family, I think it’s important for us to cultivate our independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility since we are the future of our country. We can share some housework with our parents and should keep it in mind that it’s better to give than to receive.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。作文給出了一個(gè)話題，關(guān)于中國(guó)的獨(dú)生子女問(wèn)題，給了兩個(gè)提綱，但是沒有具體要點(diǎn)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。考生要圍繞這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，展開敘述，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文出現(xiàn)了一些短語(yǔ)：not only…but also…不但…而且，brings about 產(chǎn)生，a series of problems一系列問(wèn)題，be lacking in缺乏，.和多變的句式：With a better control of the population, the country has made remarkable achievements in the aspects of economic and social development while the family can focus on the only child and afford better education for him.這句話用while表示轉(zhuǎn)折， As the only child in my family, I think it’s important for us to cultivate our independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility since we are the future of our country. 這句話用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句和it做形式主語(yǔ)，We can share some housework with our parents and should keep it in mind that it’s better to give than to receive.這句話用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)。