Question

4．請閱讀下面文字及圖表，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150字左右的文章．

1．Hold fast to dreams For if dreams die life is a broken-winded bird That can never fly． Hold fast to dreams For when dreams go Life is a barren field From only with snow	2．Strong belief is everything in wishing．If you don't believe in your own power to make your wish come true，your wish will fly away，never to be seen again．If you're wishing for something possible，then it may be possible for you to do whatever you need to make it come true．The ultimate magic is not wishing，but doing．
3．Once a teacher received a paper from a boy where he described the dream of owning a 200-acrc horse ranch and a large house．He graded it with a red F，thinking it was an unrealistic dream．Though asked to change it （he boy stated，"You can keep the F and I'll keep my dream．"Many years later，the boy made it a reality．	■85% have a dream ■78% have a dream but give up ■7% have a dream and realize it

【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．結(jié)合上述信息，簡要闡述堅持夢想的重要性；
3．談?wù)勀愕膲粝耄�并分析實現(xiàn)夢想的必要要素（不少于兩點）．
【寫怍要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱：
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．
Most people have a dream but those who make it a reality are few and far between．Therefore，what counts is to have the same determination as the boy did．（30字概括）
Life without a dream proves to be a frozen field．However，the dream turns out to be an empty slogan unless you devote the constant efforts to fulfilling it．（高分句型一）Nobody can achieve anything without persistence．Accordingly，one of the secret to success is holding fast to your dream whatever it happens．（高分句型二）
I have a dream that one day I can make a commitment to the education in the remote places where children are thirsty for knowledge．（高分句型三）I hope that my devotion will make a difference to their lives．To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children．（高分句型四）After all，many hands make light work．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對"夢想"的話題進行寫作，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從簡要闡述堅持夢想的重要性和談?wù)勀愕膲粝�，并分析實現(xiàn)夢想的必要要素方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Therefore因此；However然而；turn out to be 結(jié)果是；Accordingly相應(yīng)的；are thirsty for渴望；make a difference to對…有影響；not only，but also而且；After all畢竟；
However，the dream turns out to be an empty slogan unless you devote the constant efforts to fulfilling it．（高分句型一）
Accordingly，one of the secret to success is holding fast to your dream whatever it happens．（高分句型二）
 I have a dream that one day I can make a commitment to the education in the remote places where children are thirsty for knowledge．（高分句型三）
To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children．（高分句型四）

解答 Most people have a dream but those who make it a reality are few and far between．Therefore，what counts is to have the same determination as the boy did．（30字概括）
        Life without a dream proves to be a frozen field．However，the dream turns out to be an empty slogan unless you devote the constant efforts to fulfilling it．（高分句型一）Nobody can achieve anything without persistence．Accordingly，one of the secret to success is holding fast to your dream whatever it happens．（高分句型二）
        I have a dream that one day I can make a commitment to the education in the remote places where children are thirsty for knowledge．（高分句型三）I hope that my devotion will make a difference to their lives．To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children．（高分句型四）After all，many hands make light work．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．