9．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．
文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多著（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last August I went to Sacramento，USA．I'd be looking forward to it for ages，but in the end it turned
out to be the worst holidays of my life．My mother was born here but she hadn't been back for visit for
twenty years so she had decided to come without me．When our plane touched down，I looked out of
the window in curiosity but shocked to find it was pouring down!My mum said not to worry
as the weather could change very quick．In all，we spent two weeks in Sacramento．Believe it or not，
the sun doesn't come out even once!Instead of going to the beach or sightseeing，we spent most days
visiting museums and went shopping．It certainly was not the holiday that I had expected for．

分析 作者在本文中講述了去年八月去Sacramento的經(jīng)歷，不幸的是天不作美，在那里的兩個(gè)星期幾乎沒(méi)見(jiàn)到太陽(yáng)的影子，所以他們不能出去旅游觀光，這令作者很失望．

解答 Last August I went to Sacramento，USA．I'd be looking forward to it for ages，but in the end it turned out to be the worst holidays of my life．My mother was born here but she hadn't been back for∧visit for twenty years so she had decided to come without me．When our plane touched down，I looked out of the window in curiosity but shocked to find it was pouring down!My mum said not to worry as the weather could change very quick．In all，we spent two weeks in Sacramento．Believe it or not，the sun doesn't come out even once!Instead of going to the beach or sightseeing，we spent most days visiting museums and went shopping．It certainly was not the holiday that I had expected for．
詳解：
1．be改成been；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)語(yǔ)境判斷，這里應(yīng)該是過(guò)去完成進(jìn)行時(shí)
2．holidays改成holiday；考查名詞，形容詞的最高級(jí)后面跟名詞的單數(shù)形式．
3．here改成there；考查副詞，根據(jù)邏輯關(guān)系可知"我們"現(xiàn)在不在Sacramento，故用there．
4．but改為and；考查連詞，結(jié)合語(yǔ)境分析上下文之間為并列關(guān)系，故用連詞and．
5．visit前面加上a；考查冠詞，visit前面通常用不定冠詞a表示泛指．                                      
6．without改成with；考查介詞，分析句意為"媽媽決定要跟我一起去"，故用with．
7．quick改成quickly；考查副詞，此處應(yīng)該用副詞形式作狀語(yǔ)修飾change．
8．doesn't改成didn't；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)語(yǔ)境需要，這里講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)該是過(guò)去時(shí)．
9．went改成going；考查并列成分，根據(jù)語(yǔ)義和并列連詞and，可知這里的詞應(yīng)該和visiting并列，故形式要保持一致，用going．
10．去掉for；考查介詞，expect是及物動(dòng)詞，后面不需要加介詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先要通讀全文，整體理解短文的中心思想，然后根據(jù)短文講述的事情確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)從時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，句式結(jié)構(gòu)，固定短語(yǔ)等方面徹底進(jìn)行分析，以便盡快找出短文的錯(cuò)誤所在并加以修改．

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