Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Opinions are divided about if we should buy products promoted by stars．

Some students say that they prefer to buy products promoted by stars because of most of the stars care about the quality of the product they are going to advertise．

Besides, buying those products is a way to support the stars they like．

However, other think what some stars really care is money but not the quality of the product when they make a advertisement．

In addition, the product that a star advertises is not necessary suitable for everyone．

To my opinion, we should be cool and sensible while chosen a product．

The main aspect we are supposed consider is not the advertisement or the star and the quality of the product and its real usefulness in our daily life．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】if改為whether

【2】去掉of

【3】product改為products

【4】other改為others

【5】a改為an

【6】necessary改為necessarily

【7】To改為In

【8】chosen改為choosing

【9】supposed后加to

【10】and改為but

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】介詞后的賓語從句不用if引導，如果表示“是否”意義，用whether。

【2】because是連詞，后跟句子;'because of是介詞，后跟名詞或相當于名詞的。

【3】泛指“產(chǎn)品”用products。

【4】other改為others。other不能單獨用，此處表示“其他人”，用others。

【5】advertisement是以元音音素開頭的單詞，不定冠詞用an。

【6】necessary改為necessarily。修飾形容詞suitable用副詞。

【7】in one's opinion是固定短語，意為“以某人的觀點”。

【8】choose的邏輯主語與句子主語一致，而且二者之間是主動關系，用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。

【9】be supposed to do'‘應該做…，是固定短語。

【10】not．．but．“不是……而是……”，是固定用法。