Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假設(shè)你是啟明中學(xué)高三學(xué)生王磊，最近收到英國筆友Mike寫來的一封郵件，告訴你最近他閱讀了儒勒凡爾納(Jules Verne)的小說《環(huán)游地球八十天》,并提出了"Traveling was more enjoyable in the days before the invention of the aeroplane”這一觀點(diǎn)。你對(duì)此很感興趣，決定寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括:

1.你是否贊同這一觀點(diǎn);

2.你的理由(可以用具體事例說明)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’ve heard that you’ve read a novel of Jules Verne and believed that “Travelling was more enjoyable in the days before the invention of the aeroplane”, but I beg to differ.

No doubt aeroplanes dwarf all the other means of transportation with regards to speed and safety. Contrary to what you've put forward, travelling might not be as satisfying as is depicted in the novel in these days, when travelers tend to wear themselves out after an endless period of walk and be threatened with wildlife and infection.

Meanwhile, I highly adore flying experience. It doesn’t hurt to pamper yourself with a relaxing air journey after months of work. A pleasant journey high above the sky is sure to sweep your fatigue off, as well as provide a feast to the eyes.

What’s more, travelling is all about experiencing different culture and viewing unique scenery. Despite negative impacts of tourism on the environment.

Those are all of my points. I am looking forward to hear from you again.

Yours,

Wang Lei

【解析】

這是一封郵件，應(yīng)用文。

第一步：審題：這屬于半開放性作文，假設(shè)你是王磊，要求你給英國筆友Mike回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.你是否贊同這一觀點(diǎn)；2.你的理由。根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

with regards to；contrary to；put forward；tend to；as… as ；be threatened with；be sure to do sth.；sweep off；what’s more；look forward to；hear from等。

第三步：連詞成句

1. Contrary to what you've put forward, travelling might not be as satisfying as is depicted in the novel in these days.

2. It doesn’t hurt to pamper yourself with a relaxing air journey after months of work.

3. A pleasant journey high above the sky is sure to sweep your fatigue off, as well as provide a feast to the eyes.

4. travelling is all about experiencing different culture and viewing unique scenery.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

運(yùn)用but；with regards to；and；Meanwhile；as well as；what’s more等連接詞

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改