Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jim計(jì)劃春節(jié)期間來中國旅游。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.歡迎Jim的到來；

2.提出旅行建議；

3.邀請他來你的城市做客.

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

Dear Jim，

I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China.

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim，

I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China.Here are some details about the traveling plan.

To help you better understand Tianjin and its culture，I've arranged some activities for you and I'm glad to be your guide.We can visit some famous tourist attractions in Tianjin，such as Huangyaguan Great Wall，Tianjin Water Park and Tianjin Olympic Centre Stadium.Besides，you can also go to some art exhibitions to appreciate the magic of Chinese calligraphy.By the way，Tianjin is famous for its local delicacies so you can't miss the chance of enjoying a variety of snacks.Wish you a pleasant trip in my hometown!

I'm looking forward to your coming.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件：假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jim計(jì)劃春節(jié)期間來中國旅游.請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.歡迎Jim的到來；2.提出旅行建議；3.邀請他來你的城市做客。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：some details about the traveling plan（關(guān)于旅行計(jì)劃的細(xì)節(jié)）；To help you better understand（為了幫助更好地了解）；visit some famous tourist attractions（參觀一些著名的旅游景點(diǎn)）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。