Question

【題目】假如你是李華，最近收到英國筆友Tom的來信。他想了解你校如何維護學(xué)生在校期間的安全。請你給他寫一封英語回信，介紹你校的做法，如重視安全問題、加強安全教育、增加保安人員、來訪登記等。

注意：1.信的內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)120左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總數(shù))。

3.參考詞匯：安全意識awareness of safety；登記register；保安security guard

Dear Tom，

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

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We believe a safer school will provide a better learning environment for us students.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

So far，things have been done to protect the students in and out of our school. Our teachers often remind us of the importance of security. We have organized several theme school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety. We have been taught ways to protect ourselves from danger. For example，if we find something unusual，we should report it to the school guard immediately or we can call the school securityline. At the same time，stricter security measures have been taken by our school，including a requirement that all visitors should register before entering our school.Besides，a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school.

We believe a safer school will provide a better learning environment for us students.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】此文為提綱式作文，解題步驟如下：

第一步：審題，抓要點：要點主要有（1. 英國筆友Tom想了解你校如何維護學(xué)生在校期間的安全。2. 介紹你校的做法，如重視安全問題、加強安全教育、增加保安人員、來訪登記等。）

第二步：定人稱，定時態(tài)。人稱：第一人稱。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。

第三步：分段落，列提綱�？煞秩�段，第一段要點1，第二段要點2，第三段做出評價。

亮點分析：

高級詞匯：

concern ， security，theme school meetings， strengthen ， awareness of safety， security line， measures ，requirement，environment

高級句型：

I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.

So far，things have been done to protect the students in and out of our school. We have organized several theme school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety. We have been taught ways to protect ourselves from danger. （不定式表目的）

At the same time，stricter security measures have been taken by our school，including a requirement that all visitors should register before entering our school. Besides，a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school. （被動語態(tài)）