Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是雙鴨山市第一中學高一新生李華，你的朋友Tom來信詢問這一個月以來讓你印象最深的老師。請你根據(jù)以下要點介紹一下你的英語老師Ms Gao：

1. 2000年大學畢業(yè)，同年來我校工作；

2.熱愛教育事業(yè)，精力充沛；教學方法靈活多樣，課堂生動有趣，深受學生好評；對學生要求嚴格且有耐心；

3.在她的幫助下，學生們的英語都取得了進步；學生們認為有Ms Gao教他們，他們都能被重點大學錄取。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to receive your email

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking me about the teacher who impressed me most in the past month. Now let me introduce Ms Gao to you.

Ms Gao, my English teacher, graduated from college in 2000 and came to our school to work in the same year. Strict but patient, she is enthusiastic about teaching and energetic. To make us understand English well, she uses different kinds of teaching methods, which makes her classes lively and interesting. Besides, whenever we have problems with English, she explains grammar so clearly that even I can understand it easily. With her help, all of us have made great progress in English. We all appreciate her help and respect her very much. It is believed that with Ms Gao teaching us all of us are sure to be admitted into key universities in three years.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】書面表達的解題思路：

1.確定文章的體裁，本題所要求寫的書面表達是書信，那么首先就需要知曉書信的寫作特點。

2.確定文章時態(tài)的基調(diào)，確定文章時態(tài)的基調(diào)對于整個寫作非常重要。它直接決定了不同句子使用的時態(tài)正確與否。本篇短文主要是對自己的老師的介紹，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

3.給文章劃分基本段落，仔細閱讀題目要求和文字提示，領(lǐng)會要寫的文章的主題，確定文章的段落，寫出各段的主題句。本題中的內(nèi)容要點有：①.寫信的目的；②. 根據(jù)所給的要點，詳細介紹自己的英語老師Ms Gao。這樣確定文章的基本段落分為兩段。

4.嘗試用高級詞匯，使可讀性增強。美化句子可以采用復合句和特殊的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，也可以采用形式主語、形式賓語或簡略句來實現(xiàn)。

5.連句成篇，在連句成篇的過程中需要注意過渡句和連接詞的使用。

【范文亮點】

To make us understand English well, she uses different kinds of teaching methods, which makes her classes lively and interesting.

句意：為了讓我們更好地理解英語，她使用了不同的教學方法，使她的課堂生動有趣。

句中“To make us understand English well”是目的狀語，句子主干是“she uses different kinds of teaching methods”，“which makes her classes lively and interesting.”是非限制性定語從句，修飾“different kinds of teaching methods”。