Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學(xué)不吃早飯，經(jīng)常熬夜等不健康的生活方式。學(xué)校校報(bào)的英語專欄正在開展以”健康生活方式”為主題的英文征文活動(dòng)，你打算投稿。請根據(jù)以下提示的信息寫一篇英語短文。

1. 指出現(xiàn)在部分同學(xué)生活不健康的現(xiàn)象；

2. 結(jié)合實(shí)際提出建議。

注意:詞數(shù)100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I have found that some classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late and not having breakfast. Although we are under great pressure of study in senior high school, it is necessary for us to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.

First, it’s important that we have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day. Second, taking regular exercise is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress. More importantly, we should develop a positive attitude, no matter what happens. Only in this way can we keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us. Lead a healthy life and you will encounter a better one in yourself.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文, 給報(bào)紙專欄投稿。

第一步：

審題: 投稿

人稱：第三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)： 總分法，分三部分，第一部分部分同學(xué)不健康生活方式的表現(xiàn)，第二部分提出具體的建議，第三部分希望大家養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 部分同學(xué)不健康生活方式的表現(xiàn)：熬夜，不吃早餐

2．提出具體的建議

①均衡飲食，吃早餐

②常鍛煉

③保持積極的態(tài)度

3．希望大家養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語 ）

lead an unhealthy life；such as；stay up late；have breakfast；under great pressure；necessary；

have a balanced diet；take regular exercise；be of equal importance；keep fit；release stress；develop a positive attitude；keep optimistic；face difficulties；be beneficial to；encounter

第三步：連詞成句

(1) Some classmates lead an unhealthy life.

(2) They stay up late and don’t have breakfast.

(3) It is necessary for us to live a healthy life.

(4) We should have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day.

(5) It is important to take regular exercise.

(6) Taking regular exercise can help us to keep fit and release stress.

(7) We should develop a positive attitude.

(8) In this way we can keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

(9) Proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us.

(10) Lead a healthy life and you will encounter a better one in yourself.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

用such as 連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(1)Some classmates lead an unhealthy life.

(2)They stay up late and don’t have breakfast.

→Some classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late and not having breakfast.

用定語從句連接下面的兩個(gè)句子

(5) It is important to take regular exercise.

(6) Taking regular exercise can help us to keep fit and release stress.

→ It is important to take regular exercise, which can help us to keep fit and release stress.

用“only+狀語”置于句首的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)下面的句子

（8）In this way we can keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

→Only in this way can we keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

用if條件狀語從句改寫下面的句子

(10)Lead a healthy life and you will encounter a better one in yourself.

→If you lead a healthy life, you will encounter a better one in yourself.