Question

14．假如你是高三（1）班的李華，你校網(wǎng)站刊登了一則"走進(jìn)英國家庭"活動的通知．你想?yún)⒓釉摶顒樱�請用英語給該活動負(fù)責(zé)人Mr Park發(fā)一封電子郵件申請參加．
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．你參加該活動的目的；
2．你的興趣、特長；
3．你希望走進(jìn)什么樣的英國家庭．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Mr Park，
I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，Senior 3．I am longing to join in this activity becauseLooking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封郵件，申請參加校"走進(jìn)英國家庭"．的活動．寫作要點包括：1．參加活動的目的； 2．興趣、特長；3．希望走進(jìn)什么樣的英國家庭．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：longto to do （渴望做某事），join in （參加），learn sth about…（學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)于…），surf the Internet（上網(wǎng)），on weekends （在周末），be good at doing （擅長…），listen to music （聽音樂），be lucky enough to do （足夠幸運去做某事），be friendly to do （對…友好），be willing to（愿意做某事），get along well with （與…相處融洽），achieve my dream （實現(xiàn)夢想），look forward to （期望…）．
【高分句型】
1．②If I am lucky enough to have the chance，I hope to live in a family ①that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．
 ①這里是由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that在從句中作主語，先行詞為family．
 ②這里是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句為I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．

2．I would appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream．
這里是it作形式賓語，真正的賓語為if you could help me achieve my dream．常用的結(jié)構(gòu)為"I appreciate/love/like/hate/dislike等動詞+it+if/when引導(dǎo)的句子"．

解答 Dear Mr Park．
    I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，Senior 3．I am longing to join in this activity because I think it a good opportunity for me to improve my English and I can also learn more about British history and culture．（參加活動的目的）
    I have many hobbies，for example，I like surfing the Internet and doing sports．My favorite sport is basketball and I often play it on weekends．Besides．I am good at drawing and I like listening to music．（興趣、特長）
    If I am lucky enough to have the chance，I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．【高分句型】I am sure I can get along well with my host family．I would appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream．【高分句型】（希望走進(jìn)什么樣的英國家庭）
     Looking forward to your early reply．
 Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．