Question

18．A survey about middle school students'health made by your group of exploring study shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year．Please write a short passage about the reasons for this and your suggestions to solve the problem．
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Answer 1

分析 本文為開放式作文．根據(jù)對英語提示的理解寫一篇短文．首先簡單描述中學(xué)生健康狀況下降的現(xiàn)象，然后分析原因，最后提出解決的建議．基本時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱為主．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)部分
The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight．（高分句型一）句中運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)
One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises or labor work like housework．（高分句型二）句中運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的表語從句和so that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)構(gòu)狀語從句

解答 The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight．（高分句型一）（描述現(xiàn)象） One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises or labor work like housework．（高分句型二）What's more，many of them don't have a balanced diet．（分析原因）
    To solve the problem，I suggest that we students should not chat on line so often in order to have enough sleep time and we should do sports for at least one hour a day．（高分句型三） Besides，we'd better eat more or fruits and vegetables and refuse junk foods．（提出建議）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．