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姓名Alice White性別女國(guó)籍美國(guó)
出生年月1976年10月職業(yè)英語(yǔ)教師工作單位第十中學(xué)
簡(jiǎn)歷：1998年大學(xué)畢業(yè)，2000年來(lái)中國(guó)工作．
簡(jiǎn)況：1．熱愛(ài)教育事業(yè)，工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，樂(lè)意幫助學(xué)生．
      2．教法靈活多樣，課堂教學(xué)生動(dòng)有趣，深受學(xué)生好評(píng)．
3．經(jīng)常向?qū)W生介紹英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法．
4．在她的幫助下，學(xué)生英語(yǔ)水平提高很快．
注意：1．不能直接翻譯所給簡(jiǎn)歷內(nèi)容．
 2．字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右．

分析 本文是一篇表格型給材料作文．在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題．
1、注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)．本文要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹外籍教師的短文，屬應(yīng)用類的文章，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
2、確定要點(diǎn)：①姓名、性別、國(guó)籍、出生年月、職業(yè)和工作單位②簡(jiǎn)歷：1998年大學(xué)畢業(yè)，2000年來(lái)中國(guó)工作．③熱愛(ài)教育事業(yè)，工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，樂(lè)意幫助學(xué)生．④教法靈活多樣，課堂教學(xué)生動(dòng)有趣，深受學(xué)生好評(píng)． ⑤經(jīng)常向?qū)W生介紹英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法．⑥在她的幫助下，學(xué)生英語(yǔ)水平提高很快．
3、寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意句子的完整性，不要受表格中內(nèi)容沒(méi)有主語(yǔ)的影響．（添加適當(dāng)?shù)闹髡Z(yǔ)）
4、注意句子的銜接，表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，人物介紹應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)潔明了．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
1、文章符合應(yīng)用文的要求，簡(jiǎn)潔明了．如第一段，介紹國(guó)籍、出生時(shí)間、身份等多用簡(jiǎn)單句．
2、并列句與從句并用，能體現(xiàn)作者語(yǔ)言掌握的水平．如：She loves teaching and she is strict in her work．并列句；Whenever the students have difficulty，she's always ready to help them．讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．
3、句與句過(guò)渡自然．如：She has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting．So she is popular with her students．She often gives students lectures on how to learn English well．前后句存在因果關(guān)系．

解答 Alice White，female，comes from America．She was born in October，1976．She works as a teacher of English at No.10 Middle School．（高分句型）She graduated from a university in 1998．She came to China to work in 2000．
     She loves teaching and she is strict in her work．（高分句型）Whenever the students have difficulty，she's always ready to help them．（高分句型）She has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting．So she is popular with her students．She often gives students lectures on how to learn English well．With her help，her students have made great progress in English．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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