Question

請根據(jù)以下表格所提供的內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文。

 

時間	2013年5月27日
地點	市區(qū)一十字路口紅綠燈路口處
經(jīng)過	一位婦女帶著小女孩闖紅燈過馬路還辱罵交警，半小時后，女兒返回給交警遞上一封道歉信
你的看法	就此事提出自己的看法（至少兩點）

 

你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.簡述此事；

2.就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎㄖ辽賰牲c）。

注意：

1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27，2013．

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27，2013．Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a  letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.

   People with bad manners can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.

  Luckily, we are also surrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇圖表類寫作。文章用圖表的形式給出了漢語提示信息。這是高考�？嫉囊环N命題形式。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全：（1）時間：2013年5月27日；（2）地點：市區(qū)一十字路口紅綠燈路口處；（3）經(jīng)過：一位婦女帶著小女孩闖紅燈過馬路還辱罵交警，半小時后，女兒返回給交警遞上一封道歉信；（4）就此事提出自己的看法；2.時態(tài)：敘述故事的經(jīng)過用一般過去時，發(fā)表自己的看法用現(xiàn)在時；3.人稱：第三人稱和第一人稱；4.適當(dāng)使用高級詞匯、短語和句型以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用連詞和插入語使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。

【亮點說明】使用了非謂語動詞的句型：1.Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman.   2.the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a  letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.使用了從句：They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter.3.使用了連詞：However, Luckily 4.高級詞匯：self-centered, apologize，unintentionally，properly

考點：考查考生的語言運用能力。