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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Tom,

Very happy to have heard you. In your last e-mail, you asked me for the advices on how to travel casually in China. Now I’d like to share my opinion.

Nowadays, take China’s high-speed trains is a popular way to travel. Firstly, it’s fast and convenient. By the end of last year, the high-speed railways have been built in most of the cities in China, which could help people travel to different places fast than ever. Up to now, the high-speed railway network has covered the total of 22,000 kilometers. Secondly, it’s stable. In 2015, which a Swedish man videoed surprised the whole world. She erected(豎立) a coin on the windowsill or it stood for 8 minutes. How amazing! So, buddy, why not to have a try?

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

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【解析】1.句意：很高興收到你的來信。hear from收到某人的來信，故在heard后面加from。

2.advice 是不可數(shù)名詞，故答案為advice。

3.第二段第一句話沒有主語，所以用動(dòng)名詞做主語，故把take---taking。

4.根據(jù)By the end of last year,可知句子用過去完成時(shí)態(tài)，故把have---had。

5.根據(jù)后面的than可知句子用比較級，故把fast---faster。

6.固定搭配：a total of總數(shù)為---，故答案為a。

7.句意：一個(gè)瑞典人的錄制的視頻震驚了全世界。根據(jù)句意可知此處是what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，從句缺少引導(dǎo)詞，缺少賓語，故把which---what。

8.根據(jù)前面的a Swedish man可知把She---He。

9.句意：他在窗臺(tái)上立了一枚硬幣，并立了8分鐘。根據(jù)句意可知此處是并列句，故把or---and。

10.固定句式：Why not do sth. ?故把to去掉。