Question

11．假設(shè)你叫李華．你所在的城市要為2017年暑假招聘英語(yǔ)導(dǎo)游，你打算應(yīng)聘．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示．用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份面試稿．
1．愛(ài)好英語(yǔ)，口語(yǔ)熟練，經(jīng)常與外國(guó)網(wǎng)友進(jìn)行語(yǔ)音聊天；
2．性格開(kāi)朗，思維敏捷，善于與人溝通；
3．本地人，熟悉所在城市歷史與文化．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100〜120；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Hello!
My name is Li Hua．It's a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation in 2017．To begin with，as a senior high student，I'm crazy about English and can speak it fluently．I'm used to practicing speaking English in everyday life．For example，Ioften chat with some friends whose first language is English online in my spare time，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and very fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a good guide should have．Above all，as a native of the city，I know a lot about its history and culture．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city．
If I am given the chance to be a guide，I'll spare no effort to do it well．In a word，I'm looking forward to it．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
For example，I often chat with some friends whose first language is English online in my spare time，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English
例如，我經(jīng)常和一些朋友的第一語(yǔ)言是英語(yǔ)在我的業(yè)余時(shí)間上網(wǎng)聊天，這真的有助于我的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)流利．
高分句型二：
If I am given the chance to be a guide，I'll spare no effort to do it well．In a word，I'm looking forward to it．
如果我有機(jī)會(huì)當(dāng)向?qū)В�我�?huì)不遺余力地把它做好．

解答 Hello!
My name is Li Hua．It's a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation in 2017．
To begin with as a senior high student，I'm crazy about English and can speak it fluently．I'm used to practicing speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some friends whose first language is English online in my spare time，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English（高分句型一）．Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and very fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a good guide should have．Above all，as a native of the city，I know a lot about its history and culture．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city．
If I am given the chance to be a guide，I'll spare no effort to do it well．In a word，I'm looking forward to it（高分句型二）．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．