Question

1．書面表達(dá)
假設(shè)你是高中生李越，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫（to scribble）和亂丟垃圾（to litter）的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封100-120個詞的信．信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．說明寫信目的；
2．對這些行為進(jìn)行批評；
3．提出建議
注意：信的抬頭、落款及信的第一句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）．
June 8，2011
Headmaster，
I'm Li Yue，a student from Class 1，SeniorⅡ．I am writing to draw your attention to some improperbehaviour among us students：litter andscribbling．
It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litterand scribble about．
I wonder if the school could place moredustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．At the same time，studentsshould be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves．I believe that，with thejoint efforts of both teachers and students，our schoolwill become a more enjoyable place in the near future．Thank you for your consideration．
Your faithfully，
Li Yue．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一封信給校長，請求關(guān)注校園中的不良行為，屬應(yīng)用文．要點(diǎn)包括：說明寫信的目的；對這些行為進(jìn)行批評；提出建議．寫作時以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：draw one's attention to sth （吸引某人的主意），do harm to （損壞，損害），feel ashamed（感到羞恥），set up （建立），develop good habits （養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣），with the joint efforts of （共同的努力）．

解答 June8，2011
Dear Mr．Headmaster，
I am Li Yue，a student from Class 1，Senior II．I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：litter andscribbling．（寫信的目的）
It makes our school dirty and unpleasant，and does harm to the image of our school．I always feel ashamed whenever I see this．【高分句型】It is clearly not appropriate for astudent to litter and scribble about．【高分句型】（對不良行為進(jìn)行批評）
 I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specified rules against such behaviour．【高分句型】At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves．I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future．Thank you for your consideration．（提出建議）
 
Yours faithfully
Li Yue

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．