Question

【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每次錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Sunny 31st, July

It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.

While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.

Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】or→and

【2】come→came

【3】relaxing→relaxed

【4】While→When

【5】its→my

【6】grasses→grass

【7】with→at

【8】Therefore→However

【9】去掉back

【10】在such后面加a

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】or→and 考查連詞。句意：厭煩了學(xué)習(xí)和城市生活的喧囂。此處為順接意義的并列關(guān)系，故把or改為and。

【2】come→came 考查時(shí)態(tài)。該句謂語(yǔ)應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把come改為came。

【3】relaxing→relaxed 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。get relaxed得到放松，relaxing通常描述對(duì)象是物。故把relaxing改為relaxed。

【4】While→When 當(dāng)我到達(dá)公園的時(shí)候。while引導(dǎo)從句時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞必須是持續(xù)性的。故把While改為When。

【5】its→my 考查代詞。此處指我看到的景象，代詞應(yīng)用my。

【6】grasses→grass 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。grass為不可數(shù)名詞，故把grasses改為grass。

【7】with→at 考查介詞搭配。at ease是固定搭配，意為“輕松地”。故把with改為at。

【8】Therefore→However 考查連詞。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折，不是英國(guó)，故把Therefore改為however。

【9】去掉back 考查動(dòng)詞。return返回，后面不再接back，語(yǔ)意重復(fù)了。

【10】在such后面加a 考查冠詞。experience作“經(jīng)歷”講時(shí)為可數(shù)名詞，such后加a。

【知識(shí)拓展】

1.表示情感的現(xiàn)在分詞和過(guò)去分詞

surprising令人驚訝的，surprised感到驚訝；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感動(dòng)的， moved 感動(dòng)；exciting 令人興奮的，excited 感到興奮；boring令人厭煩的， bored感到厭煩；annoying令人煩惱的---annoyed感到煩惱的；relaxing放松的---relaxed感到放松的�，F(xiàn)在分詞的主語(yǔ)通常指事物；過(guò)去分詞的主語(yǔ)通常指人。

2.return 和back；repeat和again；enter和into不能在同一句中出現(xiàn)。