Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

I peered over my grandma’s shoulder as she sewed pieces of cloth together. The two pieces became one faster than I’d imagined. The colors, however, looked ugly when put together and none of the patterns matched. All the patches (補(bǔ)丁) on this blanket seemed to disagree.

“Grandma， that’s the ugliest quilt (棉被) I’ve ever seen.”

“Oh, sweetie, it’s warm and beautiful,” said Grandma, pointing to a pile of crazy patterned shirts and suits. “I can take these old clothes that Grandpa and I will never wear again and turn them into something useful and good. It’s not the quilts appearance but the love that sews it together that makes it beautiful. This quilt will keep you warm on a cold night like tonight. And I know that for a fact.” Grandma put her hand on my shoulder, “Not everyone is as lucky as we are. Here, put on your coat. We’ll get a second opinion about how ugly my quilts are.”

Grandma folded a finished quilt and tucked it into a shopping bag. Afterwards, we got in the car and drove downtown. The white snow turned grayer as we got to the city. Eventually, Grandma pulled up at a dark alley (胡同) and we got out of the car. The terrible smell of rotting garbage made me feel sick and pinch my nose shut. Grandma took my hand and led me to the street lamp. I could see the snow shimmering (發(fā)出微光) in the light.

Grandma paused. “There’s usually somebody down this alley. It’s quiet and out of the wind--a good place to stay on cold nights. A nice warm quilt might make it even better.”

The dark engulfed (吞沒) Grandma and I as we stepped deep into the alley. The pavement was cracked and missing in spots. Chicken bones and stained boxes littered their way. And Grandma’s shoes made a loud sound with each step. Feeling frightened, I squeezed Grandma’s hand. Grandma squeezed my hand back. “Its OK.” she smiled.

“Who’s there?” shouted a voice out of the darkness.

Paragraph 1:

“I have a nice warm quilt, if you want it,” said Grandma.

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Paragraph 2:

Back home, I found a worn-out quilt by accident in a cupboard.

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Answer 1

【答案】Para 1: “I have a nice warm quilt, if you want it,” said Grandma. After a while, a beam of light appeared and a lady walked out of the darkness. Grandma opened the shopping bag and pulled out the multicolored quilt. “That’s pretty and it looks warm,” the lady exclaimed and took the quilt, her eyes filled with tears of gratitude. As we walked back down the alley, I looked over my shoulder and saw the lady holding the quilt tightly to her face. “You’re right, Grandma. That is a beautiful quilt.” On our ride back home, the lady’s grateful words were still ringing in my ears.

Para 2: Back home, I found a worn-out quilt by accident in a cupboard. I asked Grandma curiously, Grandma, why is there a quilt here? After a moment of silence, Grandma began to share her own story. On a freezing night decades ago, as a poor young woman sleeping in the same alley, Grandma was offered a quilt, which warmed her up. She was determined to pass the love forward. That’s why Grandma sewed the old clothes together and made quilts for those in need. After hearing the story, I gave Grandma the biggest hug ever. I thought of all the clothes I didn’t want to wear anymore and knew what Grandma and I would do the next morning.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于讀后續(xù)寫，要求考生續(xù)寫兩段內(nèi)容使之與已給出的材料構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者看到奶奶縫制了一條帶有各種補(bǔ)丁的被子，認(rèn)為這條被子非常的丑陋。但是，奶奶卻說被子的美不在于它的外表，而在于這條被子是用愛縫制的。之后，奶奶和作者一起來到城里破舊而又寒冷的街道。作者很害怕，這時(shí)，從胡同里傳來了聲音。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：奶奶說：我有一條暖和的被子，如果你想要的話。所以接下來應(yīng)該寫剛才說話的人從胡同里走出來，奶奶把被子送給這個(gè)人。這個(gè)人收下被子，并且非常感激，之后，作者和奶奶上車離開。此處，也可以描寫一下作者在現(xiàn)場的感受。

第二段開頭是：回到家里，我碰巧在壁櫥里發(fā)現(xiàn)了一條破舊的被子……本段應(yīng)該寫作者向奶奶詢問這條被子的來歷。奶奶向作者講述這條被子的故事，以及縫制被子送給他人的原因。作者從中學(xué)到了很多道理，并且決心向奶奶學(xué)習(xí)做些慈善的事情。

續(xù)寫時(shí)我們要按照已給出的材料中的關(guān)鍵詞來寫兩段內(nèi)容。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。