Question

17．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Dear Amy，
I glad to discuss your present situation with you．People often miss parents for the first time they left home．However，most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment．You cannot live with our parents forever．You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability．You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you．Maybe you will still miss your parents，and your new friends will bring joy to your new life．Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities．You will get much pleasure．
Faithfully yours
Sharon．

Answer 1

分析 這是Sharon給Amy的一封信，在信中Sharon告訴 Amy人們在第一次離開家時都會想念父母，但是你不能永遠(yuǎn)跟你的父母住在一起，為了學(xué)習(xí)或工作有不得不離開，這種分離可以鍛煉個人的獨(dú)立能力，而且新交的朋友會給你的新生活帶來快樂．

解答 Dear Amy，
I∧glad to discuss your present situation with you．People often miss∧parents for the first time they left home．However，most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment．You cannot live with our parents forever．You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability．You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you．Maybe you will still miss your parents，and your new friends will bring joy to your new life．Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities．You will get much pleasure．
Faithfully yours
Sharon．
詳解：
1．在glad前加am；考查系動詞，be glad to 是固定搭配，意為"高興/樂意做某事"所以此處應(yīng)加上系動詞am．
2．在parents前加their；考查句意，分析句意為"人們在第一次離家的時候經(jīng)常會想念他們的父母"，所以此處在parents前加their．
3．left改為leave；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文陳述一個客觀事實，故用一般現(xiàn)在時．
4．educations改為education；考查名詞，education作為"教育"講是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故此處用原形education．
5．our改為your；考查物主代詞，分析句意為"你不能永遠(yuǎn)跟你的父母住在一起"，所以把our改為your．
6．person改為personal；考查形容詞，這里用形容詞形式作定語，修飾后面的名詞ability，意為"個人能力"．
7．whomever改為whoever；考查代詞，這里用主格形式whoever作動詞has的主語．
8．a(chǎn)nd改為but；考查連詞，分析句意為"你可能會想念你的父母，但是新的朋友會給你帶來快樂"，所以用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折．
9．will改為should或去掉will；考查情態(tài)動詞，suggest接that 賓語從句時，要用虛擬語氣，that從句要用should+動詞原形，should可以省略．
10．the改為an；考查冠詞，這里用不定冠詞an表示泛指，take an activite part in 意為"積極參加"．

點評 短文改錯首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語等基礎(chǔ)知識進(jìn)一步分析各個句子，找出文中的錯誤加以修改．