Question

1．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
請(qǐng)?jiān)谥腔�、金錢、真理、權(quán)力和美這五項(xiàng)中選擇你認(rèn)為最重要的，并闡述你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
It is the wisdom of these men that moulded and changed the trajectory of the history．
正是這些人的智慧塑造和改變了歷史的軌跡．
本句為強(qiáng)調(diào)句；它強(qiáng)調(diào)了句中的主語 the wisdom of these men （指的是：這些人的智慧；并非指人），故用連接詞that引導(dǎo)后面的從句．
句型二：
If Chairman Mao had no wisdom，we wouldn't have had the new China and the happy life we are living now．
如果毛主席沒有智慧，我們就不會(huì)有新中國(guó)以及我們現(xiàn)在過的幸福生活．
本句為虛擬語氣句；由于if從句使用了一般過去時(shí)，故主句應(yīng)使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞would/wouldn't+have+done的形式．

解答 （To choose wisdom）
    Looking back，we see wise men exist in every dynasty and era in mankind's history．It is the wisdom of these men that moulded and changed the trajectory of the history．【高分句型一】Their wisdom become the topics of our daily conversations，the focus of our history books and even anecdotes that are widespread across the globe．（通過論述是歷朝歷代的智者塑造和改變了歷史的軌跡，從而提出論點(diǎn)：即智慧最重要．）
    If Chairman Mao had no wisdom，we wouldn't have had the new China and the happy life we are living now．【高分句型二】If Edison had no wisdom，we would probably be still living in the dark during nights．If Albert Einstein had no wisdom，we wouldn't have got our knowledge about the universe，about space and time．（以歷史上的偉人為例，論述了智慧的重要性．）
    As ordinary people，we don't need to become wise men like the ones I have just mentioned above．Yet we still need to learn and try to gain wisdom in everyday life．Wisdom is necessary for our studies，work and even entertainment．With wisdom，we may not become a great person，but at least we can be decent．（論述了智慧在我們普通人的日常生活中也很重要．）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首先應(yīng)注意議論文寫作的三個(gè)要素：1、提出論點(diǎn)；2、組織論據(jù)，進(jìn)行論證；3、得出結(jié)論； 其次，除了學(xué)會(huì)套用一些常用的句型和短語外，還需要根據(jù)題目的具體內(nèi)容和要求，靈活地選用句式；另外，根據(jù)句子語氣的需要，可在英語句中適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾右恍┣閼B(tài)動(dòng)詞"should/can/may/had better/must"，以及句與句之間合理使用一些并列、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語，這樣，議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，更具說服力和感染力．