Question

9．這些年，在中國(guó)有很多高中學(xué)生不太重視對(duì)語(yǔ)文學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)．
1．描述現(xiàn)象；
2．分析原因：
A．身為中國(guó)人，已經(jīng)能夠很流暢地講漢語(yǔ)；
B．即使努力學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文，考試成績(jī)依然未能有大的提高；
3．你自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息和要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)120 詞左右．
（注意：短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．）
These years in China，there have been lots of senior high students whoThese years in China，there have been lots of senior high students who pay little attention to Chinese learning．In fact，they would rather spend much time on other subjects，such as English，maths and physics than learn and go over Chinese．描述現(xiàn)象
I suppose there are at least two reasons．Firstly，they think they are all native Chinese，and have been able to speak Chinese very well．They regard Chinese as only a tool for basic communication，so they don't have to make themselves an expert of the Chinese language．On the other hand，they always find even they have studied hard on Chinese for a period，they still cann't get good marks in all exams．As a result，they give up Chinese．分析原因
I used to learn Chinese very hard but the result is not satisfactory．I believe Chinese is important and I must learn it better．自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們針對(duì)中國(guó)有很多高中學(xué)生不太重視對(duì)語(yǔ)文學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：描述現(xiàn)象；分析原因：A．身為中國(guó)人，已經(jīng)能夠很流暢地講漢語(yǔ)；B．即使努力學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文，考試成績(jī)依然未能有大的提高；你自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為描述現(xiàn)象．第二部分為分析原因：A．身為中國(guó)人，已經(jīng)能夠很流暢地講漢語(yǔ)；B．即使努力學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文，考試成績(jī)依然未能有大的提高；第三部分為自身的經(jīng)歷和看法．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
would rather do..than  do…寧愿做…而不愿做．．
 at least 至少
regard…as 把…看作是…
On the other hand另一方面
there have been lots of senior high students who pay little attention to Chinese learning此句為who 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句
 they don't have to make themselves an expert of the Chinese language此句為make加賓語(yǔ)加賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

解答 These years in China，there have been lots of senior high students who pay little attention to Chinese learning．In fact，they would rather spend much time on other subjects，such as English，maths and physics than learn and go over Chinese．描述現(xiàn)象
    I suppose there are at least two reasons．Firstly，they think they are all native Chinese，and have been able to speak Chinese very well．They regard Chinese as only a tool for basic communication，so they don't have to make themselves an expert of the Chinese language．On the other hand，they always find even they have studied hard on Chinese for a period，they still cann't get good marks in all exams．As a result，they give up Chinese．分析原因
    I used to learn Chinese very hard but the result is not satisfactory．I believe Chinese is important and I must learn it better．自身的經(jīng)歷和看法

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．