Question

4．假定你是李華，你與留學(xué)生Tom約好周六上午一起去爬山，但你因臨時(shí)接到面試通知不能赴約．請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括；
1．表達(dá)歉意；
2．說明原因；
3．另約時(shí)間．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go climbing with you On Saturday morning，I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．I hope that the adjustment won't put you to so much trouble．
What about climbing the mountain on Sunday morning？If it suits you，let's meet at 7：30 outside the school gate．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．I should be available every week end．
I sincerely hope that you'll accept my apologies．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封因?yàn)椴荒芨凹s的道歉信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表達(dá)歉意并且說明原因；二另約時(shí)間；三再次道歉．
高分句型：
1．I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．句子里inform表示"告知"；that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句 I have to go to an interview；have to 表示"不得不"．
我剛剛被通知我必須去面試．
2．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．句子里If not是省略句，表示"如果不適合"；that is convenient for you是定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是the time；convenient表示"方便的"．
如果不適合．請(qǐng)你告知我對(duì)你來說便利的時(shí)間．

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go climbing with you On Saturday morning．I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．【高分句型一】I hope that the adjustment won't put you to so much trouble．（表達(dá)歉意并且說明原因）
       What about climbing the mountain on Sunday morning？If it suits you，let's meet at 7：30 outside the school gate．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．【高分句型二】I should be available every week end．
（另約時(shí)間）          
           I sincerely hope that you'll accept my apologies．（再次道歉）                                                        
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全．通過對(duì)眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱．