Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

David knew the waterfall was coming. It wasn't his first visit to the river in central California. He figured he would hop out of his raft into the sallow water, rappel down the rocks (沿巖壁下降)on either side of the fall, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip.

But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, David's companions were his girlfriend, Sara, and his l3-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, David could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing valley that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they 'd be able to rappel down the rocks as planned.

They could wade (蹚水) to the shore, but would anyone find them there? They had no phone service, and they hadn't seen a single person in the past three days. And David knew they'd be sharing the ground there with snakes and mountain lions.

As he wondered what to do, David hit on a bit of luck he heard voices coming from the other side of the fall. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out.

We had to do get these people a message, David thought. He caught a branch and pulled out his pocketknife to carve“Help" in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasn't just any branch. He tried flying it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction.

Then he spotted his green water bottle David grabbed it and carved “Help!” on it Sara also reminded him that he had a pen and paper, which she'd brought to play games with, in his backpack.

David knew it was just an attempt. But he wrote down“6- 15-19 We are stuck here at the waterfall. Get help please”and pushed the note into the bottle.

Paragraph l:

This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect.

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Paragraph 2:

The next morning. they heard a helicopter hovering (盤(pán)旋) above them.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph1:

“All right, that’s all we can do,” David told Sara. Then they went back to the beach where they’d had lunch. They made a fire and laid out a tarp. As the evening wore on, they placed a headlamp with a flashing light on a ledge. By about 10:30 p.m.，they decided they probably weren’t going to get rescued that night, so they pulled out their sleeping bags. Before sleeping， David added more wood to the fire to keep the mountain lions away.

Then, just after midnight, David suddenly woke up because he dreamed that they heard a helicopter hovering above them and they heard the magic words: “This is Search and Rescue. You have been found. “Unfortunately, looking around, he could see nothing but endless darkness. He then fell into sleep again.

Paragraph 2:

David’s dream became true! The helicopter circled as the pilot looked for a good place to land. Finally the helicopter landed safely and it was a moment of pure happiness as the three chatted with the officers who had rescued them.When the officers dropped them back at the Finch Campground, the family learned more about the long shot events that had saved them: Some hikers had seen the water bottle in the water. When they picked it up, they noticed the writing on it — “Help!”. Then they realized there was a note inside. After they read it, they hightailed it to the campground, turned the bottle in. David is planning on having a big barbecue to meet the hikers — and thank them.“I imagine it’s going to be one of the greatest moments of my life.” he says.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。

前文主要講述了David一家去野營(yíng)，大雪和春雨把通常可以控制的瀑布變成了水流洶涌的瀑布，使得他們一家困在了山上，他們聽(tīng)到瀑布另一側(cè)有人的聲音，下決心要把信息傳遞給這些人，最后他們?cè)谒鶖y帶的綠色水壺上刻下了“幫助”兩個(gè)字，并用所帶的紙筆寫(xiě)下了“ 6- 15-19我們被困在瀑布了。 請(qǐng)尋求幫助”，然后將紙條塞入瓶子。根據(jù)給的第一段開(kāi)頭This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect.（這次，他完美地將水壺扔過(guò)了瀑布。），可知本段是續(xù)寫(xiě)水壺被扔過(guò)瀑布之后，David他們等待救援的過(guò)程。第二段是以The next morning. they heard a helicopter hovering (盤(pán)旋) above them.（第二天早上。 他們聽(tīng)到一架直升機(jī)盤(pán)旋在他們上方。）開(kāi)頭，由此可知他們最后獲救了，所以這段重點(diǎn)寫(xiě)他們是如何被救以及被救之后的事情。