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15．當(dāng)今，家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上學(xué)的現(xiàn)象很是普遍．假如你是李華．上周五，你們班就該現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了激烈的討論．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中提示的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，為《中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)》投稿．

贊成方	1．節(jié)省時(shí)間，孩子可以有足夠的睡眠時(shí)間； 2．可以舒適地吃早餐； 3．有利于孩子的安全； 4．增加家長(zhǎng)與孩子的交流．
反對(duì)方	1．造成交通堵塞； 2．增加家長(zhǎng)負(fù)擔(dān)； 3．孩子容易養(yǎng)成過(guò)分依賴(lài)家長(zhǎng)，從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看，不利于孩子的成長(zhǎng)．
你的觀點(diǎn)	…

注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)：110左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Last Friday，our class held a heated discussion about whether parents should drive their children to and from school．（高分句型一）The results are as follows．．
Some believe more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep．Some consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's safety．Still some think it offers more opportunities for parents to communicate with their children．
However，others hold different opinions．Some believe it causes traffic jams．Some think doing so will undoubtedly increase the parents'burdens．Besides，some worry that in the long run children may be more dependent on their parents，which does harm to their growth．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，you can do so if your child is very young，but when he/she grows up to a proper age，you should let him/her to be independent．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息 當(dāng)今，家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上學(xué)的現(xiàn)象很是普遍．假如你是李華．上周五，你們班就該現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了激烈的討論．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中提示的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，為《中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)》投稿．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：從贊成方、反對(duì)方 和 你的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：for the sake of children's safety為了孩子的安全起見(jiàn)；communicate with 溝通；However然而；Besides另外；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；grow up成長(zhǎng)；
Last Friday，our class held a heated discussion about whether parents should drive their children to and from school．（高分句型一）
Besides，some worry that in the long run children may be more dependent on their parents，which does harm to their growth．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，you can do so if your child is very young，but when he/she grows up to a proper age，you should let him/her to be independent．（高分句型三）

解答 Last Friday，our class held a heated discussion about whether parents should drive their children to and from school．（高分句型一）The results are as follows．．
       Some believe more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep．Some consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's safety．Still some think it offers more opportunities for parents to communicate with their children．
       However，others hold different opinions．Some believe it causes traffic jams．Some think doing so will undoubtedly increase the parents'burdens．Besides，some worry that in the long run children may be more dependent on their parents，which does harm to their growth．（高分句型二）
       In my opinion，you can do so if your child is very young，but when he/she grows up to a proper age，you should let him/her to be independent．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．