Question

13．你校學生會需招聘一名留學生做英語學習顧問（English Study Advisor），請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事．主要內容包括：
（1）母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先；
（2）解答英語學習問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動；
（3）每周 工作四小時，報酬面議；
（4）聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel.13011223344）
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
English Study Advisor Wanted．
The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．（高分句型一）
The applicant should be a native speaker of English．Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．（高分句型二）If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．（高分句型三）Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 你校學生會需招聘一名留學生做英語學習顧問（English Study Advisor），請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事．主要內容包括：（1）母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先；（2）解答英語學習問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動；（3）每周 工作四小時，報酬面議；（4）聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel.13011223344）．寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系．根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．注意：（1）詞數100左右；（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，高分句型：
The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．句中使用動詞不定式；
The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．并列的動名詞短語作賓語；
Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．被動語態(tài)在句中出現(xiàn)；
If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．經典使用條件句；
Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．巧妙使用一般將來時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)．

解答 English Study Advisor Wanted
       The Students'Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term．The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practise their oral English，answering their questions，and helping organize activities such as singing，English evenings，or lectures on interesting topics．（高分句型一）
       The applicant should be a native speaker of English．Fluency in Chinese is preferred．The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week．（高分句型二） If you are interested，please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview．（高分句型三）Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Students'Union

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．