Question

假如你是張偉，你的好友王楠因不擅長(zhǎng)與他人交流，感到非�？鄲馈Ｗ罱�，他來信向你求助。請(qǐng)你用英語給他寫一封100詞左右的回信。 主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．勸他不必為此事感到苦惱；
2．告訴他與別人有效地交流是很重要的；
3．就如何改變目前的狀況給他提出幾點(diǎn)建議。
注意：信的開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好， 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Wang Nan,
I know you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
I hope my advice will be of help to you.
All the best.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei

Answer 1

Dear Wang Nan,
  I know you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.
As the saying goes, “Every man has his faults”. I notice some people around us are also not good at communication, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. Of course, good communication is important for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can increase our chance of success. That is why I would like to offer you some advice on how to develop effective communication skills.
Firstly, be direct and honest to those you talk to so that they can understand you easily. Secondly, be aware of what you want to say and express yourself clearly. Thirdly, learn to understand others when they talk so that you can exchange ideas with them.
I hope my advice will be of help to you.
    All the best.
Yours sincerely,
                                                                 Zhang Wei

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。你的好友王楠因不擅長(zhǎng)與他人交流，感到非�？鄲�。最近，他來信向你求助。你用英語給他寫一封100詞左右的回信.要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的good communication is important for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can increase our chance of success.使用了非限制性定語從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。