Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是高中生李華，你的朋友李明在學(xué)校住宿，他寫信告訴你他因不善于交友而苦惱。請你給他寫一封回信并提出一些建議。

要點如下：

1. 要善于樂于助人；

2. 多與他人交流；

3. 多參加學(xué)�；顒印�

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；

2. 要點齊全，書寫工整。

3. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Li Ming,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

I'm sorry to hear that you're worrying about making friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.

First, you should be friendly to others and always ready to help others. If you do so, you’ll make friends easily. Second, you should try to communicate with others more. It is also very important and it will make your friends understand you better. Third, you’d better take an active part in activities of your school, such as sports, games, travels, parties, etc. By doing these, you'll get more chances to communicate with other people. Therefore, you’ll have more chances to make new friends.

I do hope you will find these suggestions useful. Anyhow, there're many ways to develop a good friendship. Hope you'll solve this problem and get along well with your friends.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是高中生李華，你的朋友李明在學(xué)校住宿，他寫信告訴你他因不善于交友而苦惱。請你給他寫一封回信并提出一些建議。要點如下：1.要善于樂于助人；2.多與他人交流；

多參加學(xué)校活動。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；2. 要點齊全，書寫工整。3. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】語言簡練，條理清晰，采用常見的三段形式。I'm sorry to hear that you're worrying about making friends.句中運用賓語從句；If you do so, you’ll make friends easily.條件狀語從句使用得當(dāng)；I do hope you will find these suggestions useful.強調(diào)謂語的運用使語氣加強；另外，F(xiàn)irst, Second, Third,使文章顯得層次分明；By doing these, communicate with，you’d better take an active part in，Therefore, Anyhow,這些單詞、詞組和句式的運用使文章顯得生動、鮮活。