Question

假如你叫李華, 是一位高一學(xué)生。最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)一些同學(xué)在教室使用手機(jī)，影響學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)用英語給校長寫封信，反映這些同學(xué)在教室使用手機(jī)的情況，并提出兩條建議。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1、在課堂上經(jīng)常聽見手機(jī)的鈴聲；
2、有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信息。
注意：1、要求作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使信的內(nèi)容充實(shí)、語言連貫流暢；
2、詞數(shù)：120
3、開頭已給出
4、參考詞匯：手機(jī)的鈴聲the ringing of mobile phones   短信short messages
Dear principal,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and…
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Answer 1

Dear principal,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ringing of mobile phones, which has a bad effect on our study. What’s worse, some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phone. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to study, so quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons.
To keep the classroom quiet, I suggest our school make the following rules about the use of mobile phones in the classroom. First, those with mobile phones should turn them off in class. Second, they should not talk on the phone or send short messages in the classroom. I think, if anyone breaks the rules, proper ways should be thought of to punish him or her.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,  Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇建議信，文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：建議信作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。提出建議要切實(shí)可行，要符合英語習(xí)慣，所以在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。