Question

假設(shè)你是王明，本周是你們學(xué)�！碍h(huán)境保護(hù)宣傳周”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示的要點(diǎn)，為宣傳欄寫(xiě)引言，介紹保護(hù)珍稀動(dòng)物的情況。
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容] 

必要性	動(dòng)物是人類(lèi)親密的朋友，尤其是珍稀動(dòng)物的存在使整個(gè)世界變得豐富多彩。
現(xiàn)狀	最近聽(tīng)到甚至動(dòng)物園里的珍稀動(dòng)物都遭到人為傷害，深表震驚。
原因	有些人對(duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物認(rèn)識(shí)不夠及對(duì)動(dòng)物漠不關(guān)心。
措施	1.牢記保護(hù)珍稀動(dòng)物是我們每個(gè)人的職責(zé)。 2. 應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)宣傳(publicize)其意義。

 [寫(xiě)作要求]
1．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；
2．第一句已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Animals are our close friends．                                                                                       
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                     

Answer 1

Animals are our close friends. Without them，especially the rare species，the world would be too dull to live in．Unfortunately, we have heard recently that rare animals，even when kept in the zoo，couldn’t escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．The reason is that some people lack understanding of the existence of these animals and don’t care for them．
Therefore，we should take active measures，studying and publicizing the information about rare animals．Keep in mind that protecting animals is protecting ourselves and thus it is our duty to do it well．

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作。話題是環(huán)境保護(hù)宣傳周，要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式表示的，要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不能只是把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語(yǔ)、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。nfortunately, we have heard recently that rare animals，even when kept in the zoo，couldn’t escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．這句話用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略句型， The reason is that some people lack understanding of the existence of these animals and don’t care for them．
這句話是表語(yǔ)從句，還要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。象Therefore等等
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因?yàn)楸疚牡囊�求是不能�?xiě)出提綱式，所以在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要變換句式，不能一個(gè)句式一成不變，要給讀者全新的感覺(jué)。