Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖片，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Many students in China regard passing the college entrance examination as the ultimate (終極的) goal of academic life. Almost all students study hard up to senior high school to get higher grades in every subject, and be in a better position to excel in gaokao and get admitted to a “good” university, fewer challenges lie between them and a college diploma. Therefore, quite a few students, over-burdened with studies since their primary school days, lose interest in studies, let alone excelling in academics after entering a university.

However, getting a college degree now requires more effort than it did before. In September, the Ministry of Education released an announcement, requiring universities to increase the difficulty of undergraduate courses and work harder to end academic misconduct in bachelor’s theses (畢業(yè)論文). Universities will reasonably increase students’ academic burden to encourage them to work harder and improve their knowledge and skill levels.

However, while the Ministry of Education’s plans aim to increase university students’ academic burden, they’re not intended to put extra pressure on them. Instead, the new requirements are meant to fulfill the basic requirements of university education.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概括上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：

(1) 你對(duì)“大學(xué)生增負(fù)”持什么觀點(diǎn)？說明你的理由(至少兩點(diǎn))；

(2) 你進(jìn)入大學(xué)后將如何度過你的大學(xué)生活？

[寫作要求]

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，語數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Many college students, who once worked hard to achieve high gaokao scores, lose interest in studies and fail to acquire outstanding academic abilities. Fortunately, a change in college education is on the way.

I firmly back up the act that universities reasonably increase students’ academic burden. Firstly, to ensure the high quality of education, universities should keep students under competitive pressure by assigning the challenging tasks. Secondly, university life is widely acknowledged to be an important time in shaping young people’s personalities and values, so they should take advantage of it. Lastly, to gain an edge in future careers, students are expected to study harder to equip themselves with more knowledge and skills.

When I enter university, I will cherish my university life by making it busy but valuable. I will pursue learning as much as possible, visit libraries constantly and participate in various activities, in which way I devote myself to enriching my university life.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生完成讀寫任務(wù)。首先考生要簡要總結(jié)文章內(nèi)容，其次就文章內(nèi)容發(fā)表自己的看法，最后闡明如何度過自己的大學(xué)時(shí)光。

第一步：審題

體裁：夾敘夾議

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分

要求：1.總結(jié)文章

2. 對(duì)“大學(xué)生增負(fù)”的觀點(diǎn)和原因

3. 如何度過自己的大學(xué)生活

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

lose interest in / fail to do/ on the way/back up/ academic burden/ competitive / shape people’s personalities and values/ take advantage of /be expected to / equip …with /participate in /devote to

第三步：連詞成句

Many college students lose interest in studies and fail to acquire outstanding academic abilities.

Fortunately, a change in college education is on the way.

I firmly back up the act that universities reasonably increase students’ academic burden. Firs

To ensure the high quality of education, universities should keep students under competitive pressure by assigning the challenging tasks.

University life is widely acknowledged to be an important time in shaping young people’s personalities and values, so they should take advantage of it.

To gain an edge in future careers, students are expected to study harder to equip themselves with more knowledge and skills.

When I enter university, I will cherish my university life by making it busy but valuable.

I will pursue learning as much as possible, visit libraries constantly and participate in various activities.

第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞）

1. 表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：first of all; to start with; firstly；in the end,；at last…

2. 表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least…

3. 表因果關(guān)系：because; as; so…

第五步：修改潤色 (加入從句或高級(jí)詞匯)