Question

15．你是張偉的好朋友John，張偉即將參加學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)朗誦比賽，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫(xiě)一封建議信．
比賽之前：認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備：如平時(shí)可對(duì)著鏡子練習(xí)；用語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)練，使評(píng)委印象深刻．
比賽時(shí)：保持微笑；忘詞時(shí)不緊張，繼續(xù)演講．
寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容：
1．說(shuō)明回信的意圖；
2．向張偉提出建議；
3．預(yù)祝張偉比賽成功．
Dear Zhangwei，
…
Yours，
John．

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you．運(yùn)用了并列句，同時(shí)也使用了限制性定語(yǔ)從句；In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicingbefore a mirror．本句運(yùn)用了含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．目的狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用的恰到好處；When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，原因狀語(yǔ)從句和祈使句完美結(jié)合．

解答 Dear Zhangwei，
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you．（高分句型） In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror．（高分句型）
Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．（高分句型） When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．Wish you success in the speech．
Yours，
John

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的文章較開(kāi)放式的文體，比較好寫(xiě)．學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，首先思路要清晰，要對(duì)所表達(dá)的句子通順的說(shuō)出來(lái)，遇到不會(huì)的要學(xué)會(huì)替換所用語(yǔ)，來(lái)達(dá)到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對(duì)于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ)，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來(lái)使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體．