1.假設(shè)你是李華,想通過希望工程為一名山村兒童提供一定的經(jīng)濟(jì)援助.請給相關(guān)部門寫一封信,請他們幫助選擇一位合適人選(candidate).信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn):
1.幫助對象應(yīng)符合的情況.
2.資助計劃如何具體實施
注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于120;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù).
To whom it may concern,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Tieyi High School.                                              .

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息通過希望工程為一名山村兒童提供一定的經(jīng)濟(jì)援助.給相關(guān)部門寫一封信,寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點(diǎn):幫助對象應(yīng)符合的情況;資助計劃如何具體實施  2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài); 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):I'm writing to tell you that I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area.(高分句型一)句中使用that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句
 I wonder if it is convenient for you to take the following into consideration.(高分句型二)句中if是意思是"是否",引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句
On the one hand,I will send 50 yuan to him/her every month until he/she finishes his/her junior middle school.On the other hand,I plan to teach the child math and English in person during my vacations.(高分句型三)句中使用了on the one hand;on the other hand"一方面;另一方面"

解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm Li Hua,a student from Tieyi High School.I'm writing to tell you that I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area.(高分句型一) Could you please recommend a proper candidate?
     I wonder if it is convenient for you to take the following into consideration.(高分句型二)First,the child should come from Gansu Province,for I expect to help a child from my hometown.Second,it will be better if the child is in Grade One.I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning.
     My plan will be carried out as follows.On the one hand,I will send 50 yuan to him/her every month until he/she finishes his/her junior middle school.On the other hand,I plan to teach the child math and English in person during my vacations.(高分句型三)
     I am looking forward to your early reply.Thank you.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Best regards,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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