Question

1．假如你是吳東，你的朋友李明因肥胖而感到煩惱，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120個(gè)詞的一封信，就健康飲食，體育鍛煉，自信等方面提出自己的建議．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的朋友李明因肥胖而感到煩惱，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120個(gè)詞的一封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：就健康飲食，體育鍛煉，自信等方面提出自己的建議，2、要在恰當(dāng)?shù)姆秶鷥?nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：as a result of由于…的原因；In fact事實(shí)上；build up建造；Above all首先；In addition另外；
I am writing to tell you what you should do to recover you health．（高分句型一）
Above all，you should have a wholesome diet by eating more vegetables and fruit because they rich in vitamins and fibre．（高分句型二）
Eat less cheese and chocolate which contains much sugar and fat which will make you fat．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wu Dong，
      I am sorry to hear that you are ill as a result of being fat．You shouldn't have eaten so much food．In fact，you'd better do more sports and build up your body．I am writing to tell you what you should do to recover you health．（高分句型一）
      Above all，you should have a wholesome diet by eating more vegetables and fruit because they rich in vitamins and fibre．（高分句型二）Eat less cheese and chocolate which contains much sugar and fat which will make you fat．（高分句型三）In addition，you should exercise regularly and have enough sleep．Don't be too tired．What's more，keeping happy and a balanced diet are as important as sports．
       I look forward to seeing a heathy  Li Ming soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Wu Dong

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．