Question

【題目】 書面表達

假定你是陳華,你的朋友Kate計劃寫一篇關(guān)于世界主要國家中學(xué)生課外閱讀時間的小論文。她給你發(fā)了郵件詢問有關(guān)情況,請寫一封英文郵件進行回復(fù)。

內(nèi)容主要包括:1.你校同學(xué)課外閱讀投入時間;

2.分析這種狀況的原因;

3.你的觀點。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Kate,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Kate,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. Most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of extracurricular reading, as a result, the time students devote to reading is too limited, about 20 minutes on average a day.

I think the reasons are various. Firstly, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Besides, others haven’t formed the reading habit. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or computer games.

Reading has many benefits, through which we can learn a lot about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time for extracurricular reading.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Chen Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是陳華,你的朋友Kate計劃寫一篇關(guān)于世界主要國家中學(xué)生課外閱讀時間的小論文。她給你發(fā)了郵件詢問有關(guān)情況,請寫一封英文郵件進行回復(fù)。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好。

【亮點說明】Reading has many benefits, through which we can learn a lot about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. 運用了非限制性定語從句；Firstly, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Besides, others haven’t formed the reading habit. 這兩句的表達使得文章的層次很清晰；So it is quite necessary for students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time for extracurricular reading. 運用了so that將長句完美地表達出來。