Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
學(xué)校英語論壇對是否需要安裝"綠壩——花季護航"軟件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保證學(xué)生健康上網(wǎng)一事展開了一場激烈的討論。請你結(jié)合下列正反理由,在論壇上發(fā)貼來闡述一下你個人對此問題的看法。
詞數(shù): 100詞左右。
   支持理由
1. 安裝容易，操作簡單，便于家長監(jiān)控孩子的上網(wǎng)活動；
2. 能過濾一些黃色網(wǎng)站，幫助我們營造一個健康的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)環(huán)境。
   反對理由
1. 不能從根本上解決學(xué)生瀏覽不良網(wǎng)站的問題；
2. 國家每年為此耗資巨大；
3. 軟件本身不成熟，經(jīng)常出錯誤。
   你的觀點？
   參考詞匯:
安裝install；  過濾filter；    黃色網(wǎng)站porn web-site
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Answer 1

There is no doubt that we should protect students from harmful websites. But we argue about whether we should install the software Green Dam —Youth Escort.
     There are two main reasons why we should install the software. First, the software is easy to install and use. It is convenient for parents to watch over their children’s net activities. Second, it can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment. However, some think it cannot protect students from all harmful websites. It costs the government too much every year. Even worse, it is not well-developed and always makes some mistakes.
     As for me, I think we should install the software. After all, it has more advantages than disadvantages.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)為正反方議論文。討論是否需要安裝"綠壩——花季護航"軟件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保證學(xué)生健康上網(wǎng)一事展開了一場激烈的討論。，要寫出贊同的觀點和反對的觀點，及自己的觀點，文章結(jié)構(gòu)為：?引入句→②正方觀點闡述→?反方觀點闡述→④自己的觀點，論述兩種不同觀點主要是結(jié)合要點寫，要注意遣詞造句，自己的看法沒有要點要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。要求學(xué)生有很好的英語思維能力。范文的亮點有：it can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment.還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句子連起來，如：first，second，Even worse,As for me等詞。
點評：正反方議論文結(jié)構(gòu)典型，要記住基本結(jié)構(gòu)，另外多記憶一些模板句。寫作時可以套用一些固定格式，但里面的內(nèi)容句式要富于變化，層次清晰，語句連貫。