Question

11．假如你是李華，開學(xué)之初，你在英語聽力學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，發(fā)郵件向已回美國的外教Jenny請教，內(nèi)容如下：
1．表達對她的思念．
2．英語聽力學(xué)習(xí)遇到的困難．
3．尋求提升英語聽力能力的建議并邀請她方便時再來中國．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．郵件開頭已寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Jenny，
How are you doing these days？
It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）I miss you a lot．
Thank you so much for your help with my English study．Now I'm faced with some new learning problems．Firstly，I feel it difficult to do well in listening．Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）I really hope you can give me some good advice on how to improve my listening skills．I believe I can make great progress with your help．
By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to seeing you again．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，開學(xué)之初，你在英語聽力學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，發(fā)郵件向已回美國的外教Jenny請教，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：表達對她的思念；英語聽力學(xué)習(xí)遇到的困難；尋求提升英語聽力能力的建議并邀請她方便時再來中國．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：see sb off給某人送行；be faced with面對；Firstly首先；do well in在…方面做得好；Besides另外；make great progress取得巨大進步；By the way順便說一下；look forward to盼望；
It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）
Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）
By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jenny，
      How are you doing these days？It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）I miss you a lot．
      Thank you so much for your help with my English study．Now I'm faced with some new learning problems．Firstly，I feel it difficult to do well in listening．Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）I really hope you can give me some good advice on how to improve my listening skills．I believe I can make great progress with your help．
      By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to seeing you again．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．