Question

7．假如你叫小明，是某市某中學學生．最近你校在為一批來自英國的學生征尋住宿家庭，你有意申請．請根據(jù)下表提供的信息用英語給校長寫封信，說明你的理由．
申請理由：

住房條件	寬敞、整潔、環(huán)境優(yōu)美
語言優(yōu)勢	擅長英語，父母是英語教授，不會有交流困難
接待經(jīng)驗	上個月接待過兩名美國學生
參觀游覽	父親可駕車陪同參觀附近的名勝
其他	…（內(nèi)容由考生自己添加）

注意：1．文章必須包括所有要點．
   2．詞數(shù)：100左右．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students．Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students．
We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely，
Xiaoming．
Sincerely，
Xiaoming．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．
該句型使用which引導的一個非限制性定語從句，which指先行詞a large and clean house；
（高分句型二）  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
該句使用了  I would greatly appreciate it if…如果…我會很感激的…
高級詞匯：lie in坐落于；have any difficulty in 做某事有困難；places of interest 名勝古跡； appreciate 感激；

解答 Dear sir，
    I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students．
   （介紹住房條件） We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（高分句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．（語言優(yōu)勢）My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．（接待經(jīng)驗）Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．
  （高分句型二）  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
    Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                             Sincerely，
                                                                                                             Xiaoming

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧