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【題目】假如你是英語報紙English Corner欄目的編輯李華，現(xiàn)在有個叫李明的學(xué)生向你請教如何學(xué)好英語。下面你就如何學(xué)好英語以書信的形式給他提出幾條建議。

1．每天早上朗讀英語單詞、句子及短文。盡量多記一些有用的句子并背誦一些短文章。

2．經(jīng)常進行大量的課外閱讀。

3．每天應(yīng)安排一些時間進行聽力練習(xí)。

4．只要你能充分利用你的業(yè)余時間來學(xué)習(xí)英語，你的英語就會很快得到提高。

注意：1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫；

2．開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右。

Dear Li Ming，

I'm an editor of English Corner. I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well.

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All the best!

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Ming，

I am an editor of English Corner. I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well. Here are some of my suggestions.

First of all, I suggest you (should) read the English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning. Meanwhile, you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well. Moreover, it is suggested that you (should) read a great variety of books after school. Last but not least, a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises.

As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English, surely, you will make rapid progress. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” If you stick to your dream and study hard, I'm sure you will be successful in your English study.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，給李明提出幾條關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語的建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

要求：有以下幾點建議

1．每天早上朗讀英語單詞、句子及短文。盡量多記一些有用的句子并背誦一些短文章。

2．經(jīng)常進行大量的課外閱讀。

3．每天應(yīng)安排一些時間進行聽力練習(xí)。

4．只要你能充分利用你的業(yè)余時間來學(xué)習(xí)英語，你的英語就會很快得到提高。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

suggest sb. do sth.; read sth. aloud; try to do sth.; memorize; recite; It is suggested that...; a great variety of; a certain amount of sth.; make good use of; spare time; make rapid progress; as the saying goes; stick to; be successful in

第三步：連詞成句

1. I suggest you read the English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning.

2. You should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well.

3. It is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school. Last but not least, a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises.

4. As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English, surely, you will make rapid progress.

5. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

6. If you stick to your dream and study hard, I'm sure you will be successful in your English study.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改