Question

【題目】假定你是李華，作為交換生在一所英國學校交流學習�，F(xiàn)在你即將回國，要作為學生代表在歡送會上發(fā)言，請按下列要點寫一篇發(fā)言稿：

1.表示感謝； 2.學習的收獲和感受； 3.表達祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear teachers and friends,

I feel greatly honored to give a speech here on behalf of all the exchange students.

Living and studying here makes us very fulfilled. During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon. Apart from that, our abilities including listening, speaking and writing English have also got greatly improved. And it is all the English teachers and classmates here that we should owe many thanks to. Without their help, we couldn’t have achieved so much.

True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with each other even after we go back home. And I also sincerely hope that some day you can come to China for a visit.

That’s all! Thank you!

【解析】首先審題，要求作為學生代表在歡送會上發(fā)言，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。任務中給出的提示信息包含如下內(nèi)容1.表示感謝； 2.學習的收獲和感受； 3.表達祝愿。抓住了這亮點，我們就抓住了文章的核心內(nèi)容，一定要注意發(fā)言稿的用語和格式。其次選用正確的人稱和時態(tài)，考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意:1、提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛，需要適當補充；2、為使文章層次清楚，可分三個自然段寫：第一自然段說明自己很榮幸作為學生代表發(fā)言；第二自然段對自己的收獲和感受進行總結；第三自然段表示友誼并不會隨著自己回國而結束。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: on behalf of代表，Apart from除……之外。還使用了定語從句During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon.和賓語從句And I also sincerely hope that some day you can come to China for a visit.等多種句式結構，增加了文章的可讀性。