Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

I was standing in the checkout line behind a woman who looked to be in her 60s. When it was her turn to pay, the cashier greeted her by name and asked her how she was doing.

The woman looked down, shook her head and said, “Not so good. My husband just lost his job and my son is up to his old tricks again. The truth is, l don’t know how I’m going to get through the holidays.” Then she gave the cashier food stamps(食品券).

Neither did I know how I could get through the days a year ago during my fresh year in the company. I didn’t know the rules, I was not familiar with the work, and I couldn’t feel the value of myself. I was even wondering whether I could get along, as my father was gone, my mother had no work and my brother was only 7. That feeling was exactly what the woman had said. Fortunately, things had changed since I received my colleague’s card, from which I felt the encouragement, and sensed happiness falling upon me again.

So I really wanted to help but didn’t know how. Should I offer to pay for her groceries, or ask for her husband’s resume (簡(jiǎn)歷)? As I walked into the parking lot, I spotted the woman returning her shopping cart. Suddenly I remembered something in my purse that I thought could help her. It wasn’t a handful of cash or an offer of a job for her husband, but maybe it would make her life better.

Then I approached the woman. My heart pounded as this was the first time that I had come with the idea to help a stranger.

“Excuse me,” I said, my voice trembling a bit. “I couldn’t help accidentally hearing what you said to the cashier. It sounds like you’re going through a really hard time right now. I’m so sorry. I’d like to give you something.”

I handed her the small card from my purse.

續(xù)寫要求：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

When the woman read the card, she began to cry.

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After we embraced, I walked back to my car and the words on the card crowded into my mind again.

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Answer 1

【答案】When the woman read the card, she began to cry. And through her tears, she said, “You really have no idea how much this means to me.” I was greatly surprised by her response. Not having done anything like this before, I didn’t know what kind of reaction I might receive from the strange woman. All I could think of to say was, “Oh my. Would itbe OK to give you a hug?”

After we embraced, I walked back to my car and the words on the card crowded into my mind again. “You Matter.” The only two words on the card reminded me of what happened a few weeks earlier, when a colleague gave me a similar card as encouragement for a project I was working on. When I read the card, I felt warmth and happiness welling up inside me. Deeply touched, I came home and ordered my own box of You Matter cards and started sharing them with people in need. As someone put it, kindness, no matter how small, could make a big difference.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，主人公在購物的時(shí)候偶遇一個(gè)生活處于艱難時(shí)期的女人，這讓作者回想起一年前自己相似的經(jīng)歷，那時(shí)正是由于同事的一張卡片的鼓勵(lì)，讓作者重新獲得快樂。所以作者也想用卡片去幫助這個(gè)女人，希望她度過這段艱難時(shí)期。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：當(dāng)那個(gè)女人讀卡片時(shí)，她哭了起來。所以接下來應(yīng)該講述女人為什么哭？具體描述女人對(duì)主人公送卡片的行為的反應(yīng)，這張卡片對(duì)她來說意味著什么，同時(shí)描述兩個(gè)人之間的語言交流，文字要能體現(xiàn)出女人的感動(dòng)。第二段開頭是：我們擁抱之后，我回我的車上，卡片上的話再一次涌入我的腦海。所以接下來應(yīng)該講述卡片上寫了什么，穿插作者對(duì)當(dāng)時(shí)收到卡片時(shí)的回憶，這張卡片是在她艱難的時(shí)期收到的，帶給她鼓勵(lì)和快樂。所以在那之后，作者打算把同樣善良的舉動(dòng)傳播下去，希望帶給別人幫助。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要求使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。