Question

11．假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)高一（1）班班長(zhǎng)李華，你們的口語(yǔ)教師Julie已完成一年教學(xué)任務(wù)，準(zhǔn)備回美國(guó)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給Julie寫(xiě)一封e-mail，并代表全班同學(xué)對(duì)她表示感謝．
要點(diǎn)：
1．Julie上課的日子非常輕松愉快；
2．Julie總是組織很多課堂活動(dòng)，讓大家積極參與；
3．她經(jīng)常說(shuō)"Never say you can't"給大家留下了深刻的印象；
4．她用"team spirit"來(lái)鼓勵(lì)大家交流和分享；
5．希望她能再到中國(guó)來(lái)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)為100左右；
      2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù)）．
Dear Julie，
                                                
By the way，I am attaching（附上） your picture with the whole class．Please do check it out．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封感謝信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)（回憶過(guò)去在一起的事）．內(nèi)容主要包括：一寫(xiě)信的目的；二回憶過(guò)去在一起的事；三表示祝愿；四附加說(shuō)明．
高分句型：
1．By the time you are going back to America，I'd like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well．
句子里 on behalf of 表示"代表"； teaching 做for 的賓語(yǔ)．
到你將要會(huì)美國(guó)的時(shí)候，我想要代表我們?nèi)�班�?duì)于你對(duì)我們的教育表示感謝．
2．In your lively class，you organized many interesting activities，in which every one of us took an active part．句子里 which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞many interesting activities，in which=where．
在你生動(dòng)的課堂上，你組織了許多有趣的活動(dòng)，每個(gè)人都積極參加這些活動(dòng)．

解答 Dear Julie，
How time flies!By the time you are going back to America，I'd like to say thanks to you on behalf of the whole class for your teaching us so well．【高分句型一】（寫(xiě)信的目的）We always felt the days when you taught our oral class were pleasant and relaxing．In your lively class，you organized many interesting activities，in which every one of us took an active part．【高分句型二】You often said"Never say you can't"，leaving us a deep impression．What's more，you told us how effectively team spirit works and encouraged us to communicate and share each other's opinions bravely．（回憶過(guò)去在一起的事）
  Now it's hard for us to say goodbye to you，though we have to．Wish you a good trip and we sincerely hope you will come back some day．（表示祝愿）
  By the way，I am attaching （附上）your picture with the whole class．Please do check it out．（附加說(shuō)明）
                                                                         Yours，
                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
"介詞+which"在關(guān)系分句中分別可作時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和原因狀語(yǔ)，代替相應(yīng)的關(guān)系副詞when，where和why．如：
　�、買(mǎi) still remember the day on which （=when） I first came to school．我仍然記得初來(lái)學(xué)校的那一天．
　�、赥he factory in which （=where） I work is a large one．我工作的工廠是一個(gè)大廠子．