Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we had held a grown-up ceremony for our come 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an promise that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we expressed our thanks to our parents which had gone through hardships to bring us up and our teachers who had been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave them cards expressing their good wishes. Finally we put on wonderfully performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it is of great important for us. I will never forget that day in my life.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉 had

2. come-coming

3. an-a which-who/that

4. grown-up 改為 grown-ups

5. which-who/that

6. patient-patiently

7. them-us

8. wonderfully-wonderful

9. or-and

10. important-importance

【解析】1. 句意：在下午，我們?yōu)槲覀?/span>18歲的生日舉行了一個成人儀式。這里在談過去發(fā)生的一件事，所以句子用一般過去時態(tài)，故把had去掉。

2. 句意：在下午，我們?yōu)槲覀?/span>18歲的生日舉行了一個成人儀式。形容詞性物主代詞our修飾名詞或動名詞，故把come-coming。

3. 固定搭配：make a promise許諾，promise是以輔音音素開頭，故不定冠詞要用a而不是an，故把an---a。

4. 句意：作為成年人，從現(xiàn)在起，我們應該對我們的社會有一種責任感。根據(jù)we可知此處用名詞復數(shù)，故把grown-up改為grown-ups。

5. parents在此處是先行詞，指人，在后面的定語從句里做主語，故把which改為who/that。

6. 副詞修飾動詞，故把patient-patiently。

7. 句意：我們的老師也給了我們卡片，表達他們的美好愿望。前面提到我們表達了對父母和老師的謝意，此處是表示老師也贈給我們卡片，表達他們的祝愿。故把them---us。

8. 形容詞修飾名詞，故把wonderfully-wonderful。

9. 句意：最后，我們進行了精彩的表演，唱歌和跳舞。這里是遞進的并列關系，不是選擇關系，故把or---and。

10. great修飾名詞，故把important-importance。