作為一名清流一中即將畢業(yè)的高三學(xué)生。請根據(jù)以下要點給某英文報寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀銓Ω呷畹目捶ā?/p>

(1) 對已經(jīng)獲得的幫助表示感謝；

(2) 對畢業(yè)后生活的規(guī)劃；

(3) 對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議。

要求：1．詞數(shù)：120左右(開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；

2．在答題卡上作答。

High school is regarded as the best time in a person’s life．As a senior 3 student，it won’t take long before I graduate．__________________________________

__________________________________

__________________________________

 

One possible version：

High school is regarded as the best time in a person’life. As a senior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.

Secondly, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study at college,for I believe hard work is the key to success. Meanwhile, physical exercise and entertainments are also necessary. Life without sunshine and laughter is bound to be a failure.

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind, by which you will be highly motivated all the time, without doubt or hesitation. Even if sometimes you are lazy, tell yourself that tomorrow holds the miracle. Just one more day may be all it will take to realize your dream.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求以高三畢業(yè)生的名義寫一篇作文，談?wù)剬Ω呷畹目捶āＲc包括：對已經(jīng)獲得的幫助表示感謝；

對畢業(yè)后生活的規(guī)劃以及對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議。根據(jù)提示信息可知寫作時要注意以下方面：1.提出建議部分可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時，對畢業(yè)后的規(guī)劃可以使用一般將來時。2.使用第一人稱。3.寫作時要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和插入語，以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，條理分明。4.注意使用高級詞匯和多種句式，比如定語從句，狀語從句等。4.字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右，注意標(biāo)點符號的正確使用。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面。作者使用了Firstly, Secondly, Finally三個表示順序的詞分別引起三段內(nèi)容，包括了表達感激之情、對未來的規(guī)劃和對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹提出建議等三個方面的要點。這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)安排使文章層次分明，脈絡(luò)清晰。文中使用了appreciation、Meanwhile、is bound to、keep sth in mind, be highly motivated ,without doubt等很多高級詞匯和短語，增添了文章的亮點。此外，作者還使用了定語從句it will take to realize your dream，原因狀語從句for I believe hard work is the key to success.和讓步狀語從句 Even if sometimes you are lazy,等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章語言富于變化。

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