Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你們學(xué)校近期將開設(shè)“學(xué)生理財(cái)入門”(Money Management ABC) 選修課，你會(huì)參加嗎？請(qǐng)做出選擇并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)說(shuō)你的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is known to all ,this modern society is also a commercial society. Therefore, in my view, in schools, it is not only useful but also necessary to teach the students some knowledge of money management. It is wise for us to attend such kind of optional courses. My reasons are as follows.

To begin with , it is widely acknowledged that schooling equips us for the future. A knowledge of money management will equip us to enter the society. In addition, the ability to manage money is essential for managing our future life. With a good knowledge of money management, you will have a better understanding of the significance of money. You will deal with the problems in job-hunting and living in a wiser way. Otherwise, you will find it difficult to adapt to the future social life.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文, 要求關(guān)于是否參加“學(xué)生理財(cái)入門”選修課說(shuō)明理由。

第一步：

審題：議論文 說(shuō)明是否會(huì)參加“學(xué)生理財(cái)入門”選修課及其理由

人稱：第二、三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)： 分兩部分，第一部分說(shuō)明你會(huì)參加“學(xué)生理財(cái)入門”選修課，第二部分說(shuō)明理由。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 說(shuō)明你會(huì)參加“學(xué)生理財(cái)入門”選修課：學(xué)校有必要開設(shè)“學(xué)生理財(cái)入門”選修課，學(xué)生應(yīng)該參加選修課學(xué)習(xí)

2．說(shuō)明理由

①學(xué)習(xí)理財(cái)知識(shí)會(huì)為將來(lái)步入社會(huì)做準(zhǔn)備，理財(cái)知識(shí)會(huì)讓你更懂得金錢的意義

②理財(cái)能力是必需的，有助于將來(lái)管理自己的生活

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)）

a commercial society；useful；necessary；attend；optional courses；equip sb. for…；the ability to do…；be essential for…；have a better understanding of；significance；deal with；in a wiser way；adapt to

第三步：連詞成句

(1)This modern society is also a commercial society.

(2) It is not only useful but also necessary to teach the students some knowledge of money management.

(3) It is wise for the students to attend such kind of optional courses.

(4) Schooling equips us for the future.

(5) A knowledge of money management will equip us to enter the society.

(6) The ability to manage money is essential for managing our future life.

(7) You will have a better understanding of the significance of money.

(8)You will deal with the problems in job-hunting and living in a wiser way.

(9) You will find it difficult to adapt to future social life.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時(shí)間順序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或補(bǔ)充關(guān)系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果關(guān)系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

連句成文，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強(qiáng)、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。