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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，最近你所在的班級討論了北京動物園是否應(yīng)該遷出市區(qū)。請你給Teens寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。

贊成遷出	1.游客多，易造成交通堵塞 2. 郊區(qū)環(huán)境有利于動物生存
反對遷出	1.建于1906年，中外聞名 2. 搬遷易造成動物死亡
你的觀點	---

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：郊區(qū) suburb

Dear Editor,

Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about ______________________________________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信，是關(guān)于北京動物園是否應(yīng)該遷出市區(qū)的討論結(jié)果。這篇文章要點表達(dá)要完整而準(zhǔn)確，清楚展示主題�？梢韵忍岢鑫恼碌闹黝}，進(jìn)而列出贊成的觀點及其相關(guān)的理由，同時在其后可以給出反面的觀點，論據(jù)要十分充足。文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，前后要連貫。

【亮點說明】

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