Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加；在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉；

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每句錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Many years before I failed the entrance exam and had to go to a ordinary college. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently to me. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere of classroom. Later, I decided to treasure for my college time. I worked hard but got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】before → ago

【2】go to a → go to an

【3】Disappointing → Disappointed

【4】patiently → patient

【5】treasure for → treasure

【6】but → and

【7】are → were

【8】student → students

【9】that → which

【10】what → not what

【解析】

試題分析:

【1】before → ago ago 表示“從現(xiàn)在起若干時間以前”，常與動詞一般過去式連用。而且ago只能作副詞。before 表示“從過去某時起若干時間以前”，常與過去完成式連用。而before既可作副詞又可作介詞和連詞。此處應(yīng)用ago。

【2】go to a → go to an ordinary以元音開頭，因此應(yīng)用不定冠詞an。

【3】Disappointing → Disappointed disappointed感到失望的，disappointing令人失望的，根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)用disappointed。

【4】patiently → patient 此處形容詞作補(bǔ)語，故改為patient。

【5】treasure for → treasure treasure為及物動詞，可直接接賓語，故改為treasure。

【6】but → and前后句并無轉(zhuǎn)折聯(lián)系，因此改為and。

【7】are → were整句時態(tài)為一般過去時，故謂語動詞用過去式were。

【8】student → students one of the+復(fù)數(shù)動詞，固定結(jié)構(gòu)，故改為students。

【9】that → which 非限制性定語從句的引導(dǎo)詞只能是which。

【10】what → not what not……but……不是……而是……，常用結(jié)構(gòu)，故加not。