Question

【題目】假定你是李華，近期你校舉辦了主題為“美麗中國”的現(xiàn)場國畫（traditional Chinese painting）比賽。請為校報英文專欄寫一篇活動報道。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 活動時間、地點：

2. 活動概況：

3. 活動意義。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右：

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Beautiful China in Traditional Chinese Painting

Last Friday witnessed a traditional Chinese painting competition “Beautiful China” on campus, which has sparked a growing love for traditional art.

Over one hundred students participated in the competition. As the competition began, participants laid out the paper, picked up the paintbrush and gave full play to their talent, displaying the beauty of our motherland. Two hours later, the competition came to an end. The results will be announced in two days, and the winning entries will be on show in the exhibition hall.

Most of the students think highly of this live painting competition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.

【解析】

本文書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇英文活動報告。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇英文活動報告：近期你校舉辦了主題為“美麗中國”的現(xiàn)場國畫（traditional Chinese painting）比賽。請為校報英文專欄寫一篇活動報道。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動時間、地點：2. 活動概況：3. 活動意義。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：traditional Chinese painting（國畫）；“Beautiful China”（美麗中國）；participated in the competition.（參加比賽）；be on show in the exhibition hall.（在展覽廳展覽）；explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.（探索中國美麗和體驗中國藝術(shù)魅力）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。