Question

12．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Rose wanted a job．She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them．One day she saw a board in an office read："This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute．"Rose was exciting．She then went to the manager's office．Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head．"Do you need a typist？"asked Rose．"Yes!"he said．Rose clapped（拍） her hand and asked，"OK!How much will you pay for me every month？"The manager thought for a while and said，"I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months．Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month．"Rose smiled and answer，"Great!I will come and work here three months late．"The manager was speechless．

Answer 1

分析 Rose想找工作，去了很多家公司都不滿意．一天她看到了一家公司招打字員，就去應(yīng)聘了．結(jié)果很滿意．

解答 Rose wanted a job．She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them．One day she saw a board in an office read："This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute．"Rose was exciting．She then went to the manager's office．Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head．"Do you need a typist？"asked Rose．"Yes!"he said．Rose clapped（拍） her handand asked，"OK!How much will you pay for me every month？"The manager thought for a while and said，"I will pay you 77 dollars for∧first three months．Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month．"Rose smiled and answer，"Great!I will come and work here three months late．"The manager was speechless．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)nd改為but；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是轉(zhuǎn)折．
2．read改為reading；句中read作board的后置定語，表示上面寫著，要用現(xiàn)在分詞．
3．whom改為who；連詞錯誤．句中can type 200 words a minute修飾名詞typist，是一個定語從句；從句缺少主語，且句意指的是人，要用who來引導(dǎo)．
4．exciting改為excited；分詞錯誤．句意表達的是人的感受，要用過去分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．
5．her改為his；邏輯指代錯誤．句意指代的是男性．
6．hand改為hands；名詞錯誤．句意表達的是復(fù)數(shù)．
7．for去掉；動詞搭配錯誤．pay sb for sth為某物支付某人費用．
8．加the；冠詞錯誤．句中first是序數(shù)詞，要用定冠詞來限定．
9．a(chǎn)nswer改為answered；時態(tài)錯誤．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
10．late改為later；副詞錯誤．later多久以后．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．常考的知識點有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．