Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass, and a map wrapped in plastic... Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.

Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. “It will be an unforgettable experience, definitely.” he whispered to himself, unconsciously a smile spreading over his face.

Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip. Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray(噴霧防蟲劑). Harry told Joel he smelled terrible. Joel called Harry a coward(懦夫).

“Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together?” their father said. “You’re missing all of the beautiful scenery!”

It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip. They hadn’t looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadn’t paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument.

“Joel threw a stick at me!” Harry screamed. “That’s not true!” Joel shouted back.

Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger. “And both of you need to stop arguing!” he erupted. As he turned to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path.

Harry and Joel raced to their father’s assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.

Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.

注意:

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；

2. 至少使用 5 個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段, 每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后, 請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.

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Paragraph 2:

”Just calm down.” Mr. Taylor shouted, “Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.

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Answer 1

【答案】Para 1.

But his glasses came off when he fell in the water. Harry and Joel waded back into the river. Twigs and leaves swirled around their ankles before floating away on the current. No glasses! Harry thought they might have been swept downstream. But Mr. Taylor couldn’t see without his glasses. Everything was a blur to him now. How could they get home? “Oh great! Now we’re lost,” groaned Joel, “and it might be days before someone finds us.” “No thanks to you.” Harry blamed.

Para 2

“Just calm down.” Mr. Taylor shouted, “Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.” Mr. Taylor fumbled in his backpack and pulled the map and the compass out. Luckily, Joel learned how to read a map from his books, and Harry knew how to use a compass from his hiking club. They stopped arguing, looked down at the map, searched for the river and used the compass to find the direction. In relief, Mr. Taylor beamed proudly, “You two will save the day. You’re pretty good hiking partners!”

【解析】

本篇考查的作文類型是讀后續(xù)寫。

前文主要講的是Taylor先生第一次和兩個兒子Harry和Joel一起徒步旅行。然而，Harry和Joel為徒步旅行的前三英里而爭吵。結(jié)果后來惹得Taylor先生生氣了，他的左腳被樹根纏住了，在泥濘的河岸上滑來滑去，掉進了路旁的河里。兩個兒子前去幫助父親，還好渾身濕透的父親發(fā)現(xiàn)自己只是受了點輕傷。在給的第一段開頭中，“But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.”“came off”意思是“掉進”，第二段開頭“Just calm down.” Mr. Taylor shouted, “Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.”此句中的find our way為關(guān)鍵詞，因為后文都圍繞這個詞在說。

【高分句型1】

Harry thought his glasses might have been swept downstream, without which Mr. Taylor couldn’t see. Harry想他的眼鏡可能被沖到下游去了，沒有眼鏡Taylor先生就看不見。運用“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”結(jié)構(gòu)非限制性定語從句。

【高分句型2】

They stopped arguing and looked down at the map, so that they could search for the river and used the compass to find the direction. 他們停止了爭論，低頭看了看地圖，這樣他們就可以尋找河流，用指南針找到方向。運用so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句。